Exciting Writing

Poems

Spring
I see the bouncing baby lambs.
I hear the buzzing bees.
I smell the beautiful flowers.
I feel really happy it is Spring.
I taste Spring dinner cooking.
By Brock.

Spring
I can hear the baby birds eating seeds.
I can  see the leaves on the trees.
I feel the warm sun on my face.
I can taste and smell sausages cooking.
By Jake

Our focus for writing this term is hooking the reader in by writing interesting and exciting story starters. Here are some of our first attempts:

The Little Dragon

The little black leathery dragon stood on the trembling fingertips while blowing little white puffs of snowlike smoke.

By Robert

I see a dragon on my hand. I see boiling steam coming off it's scaly body. I know it's a dragon because it's got wings and a creepy black tail.

By Daniel

I can feel the scaly small hot dragon. I can see it's hot, hot fire inside it's scaly mouth.

By Logan

I can feel a scaly hot dragon on my hand. I can see the smoke from it's nose. It feels like a snake with legs and wings.

By Thomas

Clouds of smoke rise from the scaly creature digging it's claws into my hand. It's bony wings flap making a draught that's blowing the smoke in my face.

By Ryan McGregor

Pow!! There is was, the most amazing thing, Toothless the baby dragon! He had a fiery breath and smoky wings.

By Kwadwo

The scaly dragon is digging it's blade like claws into me. I feel like it is about to snap all my fingers.

By Luke

I looked around. I was standing on the big, dark footpath surrounded by trees. I was not scared. I found a black hat and carefully put the hat on.

By Hannah V

One day a little boy was walking on the sandy beach. When he was walking he kicked an old, velvet hat.

By Evelyn 

WINTER

The sun glistens like a pearl through the pointy icicles hanging off my front porch.     By Ryan.

Winter is the heart and soul of snow Winter is as grey as dark clouds.

By Peter

Winter is a hot hug. Winter is a jacket of fluffy wool. Winter is a chilly game of rugby and soccer. Winter is a warm drink of hot cocoa. Winter is a sparkly snowflake falling on my tongue.

By Robert.

Winter trees are as bare as the clear black sky. Winter is the damp icy grass on the freezing cold field.

Winter is the dark grey sky. Winter is dripping snowy rain making a plick plock sound.

By Kai

Winter is as cold as an ice cube. Winter is nice and cosy inside like the sun. Winter is a good time for hot chocolate.     By Jazmine

Winter is as ice cold as freezing snow. Winter is freezing as a gusty storm. Winter is as toasty as a glowing fire as I drink my hot chocolate. By Hannah M

Winter is snuggly all in my bed with a hot chocolate to drink. By Kasie

Winter is as frosty as a frozen river. By Adam

Winter is trees as bare as shaved sheep. Winter is rushing wind like a tornado. By Flynn

Winter is the time to snuggle and cuddle, put me in summer and I’ll be happy boy. By Jack

Winter is as frosty as the North Pole. By Dinah

Winter is the burning fire warming my cold as ice feet. Winter is the crunchy frost crackling under my feet as I walk to school. By Shayna

Winter is freezing like a Popsicle. Winter is as cold as the chilly wind. By Hannah A

Winter is putting the warm fire on at home and you can drink your hot chocolate in front of the fire. By Angel

Winter is icicles on my red chilly nose. Winter is a boiling fire as the frozen trees blow on me. By Sonya

Winter is going out in warm clothes on frozen ponds skating. Winter is sitting on the freezing snow building a snowman. By Lilly

Winter is the freezing ice as cold as snowflakes falling. By Laharla

Winter is icicles on my feet as I crunch my way through the soggy grass. By Rosa

Winter is as snowy as a white sheep. By Eden

Winter is sitting right in front of the glowing warm snow man.

By Kayla

Winter is as shivering as sharp pointy ice hanging on the trees. Winter is glittering as a fire place. By Phong

Winter is as frozen solid as a branch. By Tama

Winter is having a hot chocolate by the cosy fire. By Grace

Winter is as icy cold as the freezing Antarctic. By Emilie

Winter is as cold as a gigantic sparkly white snowball falling on your head. By Jesse

Winter is icy tornados, snowflakes, cold freezing wind while sitting by the fire. By Brock

Winters snow is like a big white fluffy pillow. When I step onto the white snow it crackles and crunches like broken glass. By Luke

The freezing winter is ice cold like the antartic. by Ollie R.

In the freezing winter the snow is colder than Antartica. By Devon

In winter you can put the warm fire on and have a hot chocolate or a coffee. In winter you can go outside and play with the snow. By Star

Winter is chilly as the frosty snow covering the mountains. By Fatima

Winter is as pretty as sparkling snowflakes dancing to the ground. Winter is like frozen cotton wool balls rolling across the ground. Winter is ice as smooth as warm cheeks. By Francisco

Winter is as chilly as a freezing iceblock when you first touch it. Winter is snow falling softly like flower petals. The snowflakes in winter crackle under your feet. By Jackson

Winter is icy fog with snow, freezing hands and feet. By Emma

As I sit on the sofa thunder and lightning shoots across the sky. By Ross

Winter is sitting next to a warm glowing fire with a warm hot chocolate sitting in my toasty hand as I look out at the white snow out the frosty window. By Ella Grace

Winter is freezing cold storms. winter is frosty and as black as scary monsters. By Hamish

Winter is as freezing as a piece of ice. By Hannah V.

Winter is a scarf as warm as a fireplace and as warm as mums cuddles. By Isabella

Winter is like you're at Antartica. It's all icy, windy, freezing. By Paige

Winter is looking at the fire as I am drinking hot chocolate. Winter is a bunch of snow landing on my face. By Annabelle

Winter is icy, like freezing fog creeping up onto my shoulders. When I walk on the grass on the grass in the morning I hear it crunching behind me. Winter is snow falling like flower petals. By Alix

Winter is as cold as the antartic. When you step on the grass it crackles like broken glass. By Logan

Winter is frosty snow outside of a bright glowing house. By Thomas